The Blue Bird’s Supper

T. S. Lewis on Aug 19, 2010

Tags: bird, bluebird, Darwinism, hunger, insect

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Haiku.

The blue bird swooped down

pouncing on the grasshopper.

Babes ate without blame.

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Comments (7)

ashan1614 on Aug 19, 2010
I never knew you wrote haiku. This is very descriptive – hard to do in three short lines. Well done, Mr. Lewis!
Christine Ramsay on Aug 19, 2010
A very good haiku expressing what happens in nature all the time. Well done.

Christine
alxymy on Aug 19, 2010
You just have so much talent in the pinky don’t you.
giftarist on Aug 19, 2010
Agree with ashan – very descriptive haiku. Good imagery too.
Starpisces on Aug 21, 2010
haha, I am a Haiku lover, and I enjoyed this piece of yours!
Val Mills on Aug 23, 2010
Such powerful imagery written in a beautiful simplicity. Love it.
webseowriters on Aug 24, 2010
Very nice, thanks for sharing

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