How empty my heart feels after hearing the tragic news about my Dad’s health condition. Jesus is the breath of life even when tragedy strikes.

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My heart

Will have to breathe

The heart of Jesus

Or it will not be standing

At all very tall

God is good

I do thank him like I should

Love him, Pray to him

For without him

My world would feel aweful dim

Through those lonely

Darkened nights

Which are filled

With cries of despair

His love is everlasting

For this I know for sure

He’ll walk with me

And talk with me

And hold me close

And tell me

,”I’m hear, I’m hear, I’m hear.”

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  • Christine Ramsay on Mar 24, 2011

    I am sure he will hear the lovely prayer.

  • ceegirl on Mar 24, 2011

    great poetry

  • CHIPMUNK on Mar 24, 2011

    Great read thanks

  • Freethinking on Mar 24, 2011

    There is empowerment in prayer and you have just empowered yourself with this testament of love.

  • gaby7 on Mar 24, 2011

    God answers prayers Jenny! Keep your prayerful wishes emboldened by faith!

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Mar 24, 2011

    Be strong in any situation.

  • foxpete88 on Mar 24, 2011

    good read..thanks.-

  • clay hurtubise on Mar 24, 2011

    Nice piece, well done.
    Thanks,
    clay

  • sloanie on Mar 24, 2011

    Faith will see you through all things.

  • galore on Mar 24, 2011

    our faith in almighty keep us moving in our deepest sorrows, nice read, Thanks

  • Minister Marlene on Mar 25, 2011

    He is speaking through you to all of us in your poem. Even when we think we can’t feel his presence, Christ is with us. I like the footsteps poem. He carrys you and you are strong enough to write this poem.

  • aly king on Mar 25, 2011

    lovely and heartfelt poem. remember Jesus is our Comforter. He is with us in times of struggle and He knows our pain.

  • Melody SJAL on Mar 26, 2011

    A very beautiful piece – written from the heart.

  • panjettan5 on Mar 26, 2011

    good one…

  • CA Johnson on Mar 28, 2011

    Your poem was so beautiful. I was so completely moved by your poem. Again, I am so sorry about your father. I lost my grandmother in January so I do know what you are going through now. You do need to think about God at a time like this.

  • CletaB on Mar 29, 2011

    Very good.

  • OhSugar on Mar 30, 2011

    I am a true believer in pray and I know he will have a listening ear.

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