Limerick.

The old man returned to the sea
In answer to its memory
What soft haunting whim
Was beckoning him
Why girls clad in swim suits smiled he

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  • Molly Girl 822 on Aug 8, 2012

    Cute!

  • herjave01 on Aug 8, 2012

    LOL, memories of girls in swim suit. =D

  • Paul Kurt on Aug 8, 2012

    Like this one good memorys, i know the sea does call and you have to go at times, thanks Martin

  • Jswana on Aug 8, 2012

    Talk about clever and charming! Loved it :)

  • smokychristine on Aug 8, 2012

    Very clever.

  • KittyK on Aug 8, 2012

    Brilliant work…

  • jennifer eiffel01 on Aug 8, 2012

    Lovely

  • lapasan on Aug 9, 2012

    The old man was reminded of the time when he was young.

  • sabanawaz on Aug 9, 2012

    lovely

  • gaby7 on Aug 9, 2012

    A clever poem here Martin! Returning to the sea as an old man who was probably a swimmer or a sea-farer during his youthful years can be very nostalgic!

  • elee on Aug 9, 2012

    wonderful writing

  • JCEvangelista on Aug 9, 2012

    do you take your photos? or do you just search?

  • LittleLunette on Aug 9, 2012

    Haha. :D

    the call of the ’sea,’ huh?

  • Cynthia Bartlett on Aug 10, 2012

    I liked the one about the Alarm Clock more…:)

  • Kharla Jolly on Aug 10, 2012

    I love it He may be loosing some of his facalties, yet his eye-sight and good taste hasn’t changed a bit!

  • Kharla Jolly on Aug 10, 2012

    Up to the age of 92, my Dad adored Anna Conney on the Lawrence Welk Show. I saw her on T.V. about a month ago and she hasn”t changed hardly at all. My Dad knew beauty when he saw it!

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