A junkie breaks into a drug dealer’s stash house.

Volume down, no sound,

too late, no debate,

then someone would scream and shout,

As the junkie was stretched out

on his stomach,

in a first floor hallway,

On a fading day,

a red puddle of wetness

where his right eye use to be,

as death and darkness agree to disagree,

the junkie ran out like a mouse,

as he tried to break into the stash house,

there was no dispute,

the drug dealer would shoot,

killing the junkie instantly,

the case, moot,

the dealer couldn’t even file, a civil suit.

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Comments (9)
  • yes me on Nov 7, 2010

    No mean City with its pity… liked it Frank cheers

  • pattiann on Nov 7, 2010

    I never thought about drug dealers filing court cases, I would guess they want to stay as far away from a courtoom as possible.

  • LoveDoctor on Nov 7, 2010

    This is really good:) Lol @ comment above

  • Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Nov 7, 2010

    I am with LoveDoc! This is really good. I like the pace and oddly enough even the subject matter.

  • PSingh1990 on Nov 7, 2010

    Nice Share.

    :-)

  • Lady Sunshine on Nov 7, 2010

    I see you are getting nice share\’s too. lol.

    Who would be the lesser of two evils? The dealer or the junkie? You certainly know how to rhyme. I certainly can’t.

  • PARAM on Nov 7, 2010

    Good Post.

    Thanks for Share.

  • albert1jemi on Nov 8, 2010

    great share

  • Evelyn M Carter on Nov 8, 2010

    Liked this one alot Frank! Nice share very vivid read, thanks! :)

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