The Center of Forever

F J McCarthy on Feb 15, 2009

Tags: forever, Life, love, poem, Poetry

Just passing time.

There is a place I long to be.
A place with only you and me.
No past there to remind us,
of what was left behind us.
No future to unfold ,
Never to grow old.
There is a place I long to be.
The center of forever, just you and me.

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Olivia Reason on Mar 26, 2009
This is a beautiful expression of love.
Kimberly Moore on Mar 26, 2009
Another Heartfelt Homerun!:)
The Quail on Mar 26, 2009
Well done keep it up.
rutherfranc on Mar 27, 2009
so romantic.. hope she agreed with you with all her heart..
kate smedley on Mar 27, 2009
Beautiful poem, so full of love and longing
Alice Wonder on Mar 27, 2009
Yes! This is a champion of a poem in my eyes. I love the combination of simplicity and depth, it’s delicate and beautiful. Not to mention, the center of forever sounds like a nice place to be with the person you love

As always, a pleasure reading!
Michelle on Mar 27, 2009
thats a really pretty piece
Juancav on Mar 27, 2009
Just a few words but alot of meaning.
ML Sheldon on Mar 27, 2009
Aw, very sweet.
nutuba on Mar 29, 2009
The center of forever … I like this!
Denise Kawaii on Mar 29, 2009
If only it were so simple… love is always so complicated!
Majic on Mar 29, 2009
Short and sweet
Mr Ghaz on Mar 30, 2009
Wonderful! simple but very attractive..I loved it! well done and thanks for sharing
kate smedley on Apr 7, 2009
FJ, you are one of my favourites and always will be.
Joni Keith on Apr 18, 2009
How romantic.
Deneil Merritt on Aug 11, 2009
Made me think of my girlfriend. Great poem.

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