I think this is quite a sad poem. Please leave comments telling me what you think and you can vote if you like. It would be very much appreciated. Thank you.

the chains of life,they hold me down,stuck to the ground so i cant move around, the harder i try the weaker i get, some 1 help me out of this mess. one lock no key, no one to set me free. these are the chains of life that hold me down, nothing can break them ,not no one, not no how!

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  • Dante Monaldo on May 10, 2009

    That is so true. For me, my parents are the chains.

  • ladybaby on May 10, 2009

    The key to unlock those chains – IS YO!!!!!!!!

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