The Clock Witness

papaleng on Aug 24, 2010

Tags: clock, Dreams, faith, man, Poetry, tic-tac-toe

A clock sees the heart of a man.

The Clock Witness

Tic, Tac, Tic as the clock sings
My mind is still wandering
Did I did good that’s worth living
Tic, Tac, Tic it is late in the evening.

Tic, Tac, Tic as the ticking continues
God allows me to carry where I go
Some little joy to all I know
Tic, Tac, Tic my strength be renewed

Tic, Tac, Tic as the clock’s hands embrace
That into my love be written
A litlle faith, a little thought and a little grace
Tic, Tac, Tic so a common man can give praises.

Tic, Tac, Tic as the clock keeps on smiling
Lord use me in every little things
As an instrument of Your blessings
Tic, Tac, Tic as the dawn is breaking.

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zain0077 on Aug 24, 2010
Nice poem
Brewed Coffee on Aug 24, 2010
Ay may nauna na mag comment hehehe. This is really good stuff, Papaleng. Ang galeng! Uy rhyme din. I hope I could also write poems like these. Not my talent, I guess.
Joie Schmidt on Aug 24, 2010
Unique work*

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Joie Schmidt.
Christine Ramsay on Aug 24, 2010
A very sweet piece. Well done.

Christine
drelayaraja on Aug 24, 2010
Wonderful poem friend.
bryeunade on Aug 24, 2010
Very nice
heidiefernandez on Aug 24, 2010
papaleng…. pwedeng maging song…..
papaleng on Aug 24, 2010
Thanks friends for the warm comments, Heidie, di kaya maging Tic Tac Toe ito..lol. Brew kaya mo rin yan.
Ramalingam on Aug 24, 2010
Tic Tac Tic, my heart beats rhythmically as I read your poem. A very nice work.Thanks for sharing
Jimmy Shilaho on Aug 24, 2010
A good one.
John Cornor on Aug 24, 2010
Galing very good papaleng.
bellatwix on Aug 24, 2010
very nice papaleng
Eunice Tan on Aug 24, 2010
I didn’t think that a poem about clock could be as beautiful as this.
AJ Garcia on Aug 24, 2010
Very nice indeed!
PARAM on Aug 24, 2010
Nice one…..

thanks for share.
Likha on Aug 24, 2010
Ganda nito Papaleng. Tama si Heidi, parang kanta na may katuturang mensahe. Bravo!
Anupatil on Aug 24, 2010
Its beautiful i can say ,some people run and avoid the truth of living. nice work
Lord Banks on Aug 24, 2010
I like that good rythm and pace, well done. LB
Mr Ghaz on Aug 24, 2010
lovely wonderful thanks papa..really enjoyed it
GodsGrace on Aug 24, 2010
Wonderful Poem
Dee Gold on Aug 24, 2010
thanks papaleng
LoveDoctor on Aug 24, 2010
This is a very impressive piece. I like it especially this line.

Tic, Tac, Tic as the clock’s hands embrace
That into my love be written
A litlle faith, a little thought and a little grace
Tic, Tac, Tic so a common man can give praises.
daintylad on Aug 24, 2010
one of a kind
Uma Shankari on Aug 24, 2010
Very nice, unique, lovable, evoking love for god and creation…
Goodselfme on Aug 24, 2010
Great and smooth poem. Well done!
webseowriters on Aug 24, 2010
Very nice, thanks for sharing
Inna Tysoe on Aug 24, 2010
Well written.

Inna
Rhodora Bande on Aug 24, 2010
A prayer that sounds like a nursery rhyme. Beautiful to the ears. I had to read it aloud so I could hear the sound.
giftarist on Aug 24, 2010
I think this is the phrase today. Tic, tac, tic – yesterday was major major.
sandcastle on Aug 24, 2010
Nice poem.It’s a reawakening for me.

Thanks for the share.
PR Mace on Aug 25, 2010
Such a dear poem, it was lovely.
Kaye TM on Aug 26, 2010
ayus papaleng! nice.
valli on Aug 26, 2010
Wonderful poem.
Phoenix Montoya on Aug 28, 2010
Beautifully composed kuya. Kaw pala makate eh!
Phoenix Montoya on Aug 28, 2010
I mean ‘makata’…….. true poet
vishald on Aug 30, 2010
Excellent!!!
eddiego65 on Aug 30, 2010
Very original!
Fassy on Aug 30, 2010
Wonderful poem
Melody SJAL on Aug 31, 2010
A very nice piece.
Noeal V on Aug 31, 2010
Nice Poem
MilMick on Sep 25, 2010
@@ – nice share. thank you for this! – @@
Lord Banks on Oct 12, 2010
Excellent poem nice rythm. LB
AnglaHodge on Jan 17, 2011
Beautifully penned. Words from the wise!
Lord Banks on Jan 17, 2011
Very apt words love it! LB

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