Story sonnet.

I weave for you a story of a boy
Whose loneliness would cause your heart to bend
Till then he never knew the taste of Joy
Till shadow in his closet turned to friend

They talked of all the wonders of the sun
And how it felt to join the birds and fly
Behind closed doors such magic could be spun
Enough to let his miseries drift by

Then came that day when boy was heading home
He met a girl who asked him for his name
From there they talked and let thoughts freely roam
Somehow their worlds would never be the same

When in his closet with such news to share
He realized his friend no longer there

 

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  • ImKarn23 on Jan 29, 2012

    Awwwww…sigh..

  • J L Carey Jr on Jan 29, 2012

    well done.

  • tankermone on Jan 29, 2012

    A wonderful sonnet!

  • ittech on Jan 29, 2012

    interesting writing again . Thnx for sharing .

  • Eunike on Jan 29, 2012

    Closet and loneliness, what a pair. Well written.

  • Nidhi Rai on Jan 30, 2012

    Very good.

  • indianwriting on Jan 30, 2012

    i guess the shadow knew that it was no longer required…very well written
    :)

  • aheed411 on Jan 30, 2012

    Very nice

  • Aroosa Gloomy on Jan 30, 2012

    This is Wonderful Martin

  • Eliza26 on Jan 30, 2012

    Lovely poetry.

  • Kristie Claar on Jan 30, 2012

    Very nice Martin. I love your poetry!

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