The clouds above are my inspiration when I wrote this piece about love.

The clouds above can see

With you I can soar high

The love, you give to me

Embraced me so I can fly

Image by psmithy via Flickr

The clouds above can see

That I’m like a white dove

‘Cause with you I am free

Without doubt this is love

Image via Wikipedia

The cloud above can see

You can mold like a clay

For you I want to be

A better person everyday

More pictures of clouds:

White Clouds, Blue Sky

Is there a face?

Another similar piece, A heart can see

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  • Liane Schmidt on Apr 5, 2009

    Beautiful, light and lovely*

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • JK Kristie on Apr 5, 2009

    Beautiful, Dee…really beautiful.

  • Inna Tysoe on Apr 6, 2009

    That was lovely,

    Inna

  • Sandra A Flowers on Apr 6, 2009

    very beautiful, I love the cloud pics,

  • Elizabeth Abbott on Apr 6, 2009

    Gives me feelings of warm safety. Love the poem!

  • The Quail on Apr 6, 2009

    Very beautiful and well done my friend.

  • amilia snow on Apr 6, 2009

    very uplifting & heart-warming :)

  • Stacey T Pollock on Apr 6, 2009

    Very sweet poem!

  • Yovita Siswati on Apr 6, 2009

    I love it, so simple and heart-warming.

  • Kate Smedley on Apr 6, 2009

    Beautiful! Love the music to go with it, very calming – and the photos.

  • papaleng on Apr 6, 2009

    lovely and heartwarming.

  • andrew smith on Apr 7, 2009

    very wonderful.

  • angelonearth2001 on Apr 8, 2009

    Beautiful, just so beautiful……..did miss your work… hugs

  • CutestPrincess on Apr 8, 2009

    I understand what you say, I’ve definately felt this way. I love this poem…

  • S A JOHNSON on Apr 9, 2009

    Beautiful

  • DA Cournean on Apr 14, 2009

    Very nice! Beautiful pictures of clouds

  • Joshua Miguel on Jun 24, 2009

    me too, i love staring at the beautiful sky.

  • Alexiandria M Michaels on Jul 20, 2009

    this is so wow!

  • Juancav on Aug 7, 2009

    I feel floating on these clouds.

  • Debra. on Aug 8, 2009

    Lovely!

  • revivor on Aug 19, 2009

    simple, with a lovely message

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