Trying to function with a cold.

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My body it is all achy and hurting inside,

my nose it is running and stuffy I confide.

My chest it is full and makes me struggle for air,

how much longer do I do this it just doesnt seem fair.

Spring it has sprung and with it this cold came

now trying to releave it get over it Ill aim.

No medicine seems to be working,

with this high fever now lerking.

Please just go away in my mind I do say.

Coughing spells take over me in a horrid display.

My nose it is raw from blowing so much,

ouch when I give it just one small touch.

Sleepless nights is what has incurred,

days are spend cranky and in a blur.

How much longer will this bug linger on,

maybe tomorrow it will go away and be gone.

Achooooo…

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  • Christine Ramsay on Mar 29, 2009

    Oh! Poor you! Hopefully you are feeling better by now. Look at it this way it gave you a poem.

    Christine

  • Mr Ghaz on Mar 29, 2009

    Excellent! That was lovely poem. I loved it…feeling well

  • Will Gray on Mar 29, 2009

    Great poem! Hope you are feeling better!

  • Inna Tysoe on Mar 29, 2009

    Yeah–that’s a cold all right.

    Get better!

    Inna

  • kjbriand on Mar 29, 2009

    I know about that.. Good job

  • Kate Smedley on Mar 30, 2009

    You’ve expressed it so well, it’s surprising how rotten they make you feel, I hope you feel better now!

  • M J katz on Mar 30, 2009

    Your poem almost felt contagious!! Ha ha. Good job!

  • Melody Arcamo Lagrimas on Mar 31, 2009

    I agree with MJ Katz.

  • CutestPrincess on Apr 2, 2009

    nice poem.. get well soon!

  • D on Apr 2, 2009

    Hey! I have a spring cold right now. I so relate.

  • Winter on Jul 28, 2009

    Bless you! Lol.. Thats cute…

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