Worshiping idol Gods.

Yelling, screaming and cursing too

rushing to be first they push through

tangled and mangled the scene is a mess

in confusion, frustration and determination

they press

the chaos becomes out of control

like a volcano erupting the results unfold

those who fall are trampled to death

others become crushed gasping for breath

fans don’t care how much they pay

they become obsessed in a hypnotic way

they sacrifice greatly to attend a show

addicted they are possessed to go

these Idol Gods they worship faithfully

even risking death through tragedy

how sad these fanatics can not see

that God does not approve of this insanity

If only they would worship GOD as dedicatedlyanity, worship

they would surely be rewarded with

blessed eternity

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  • Simon Belmont on May 8, 2009

    very well done and different i liked it

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