Based on a dream.

Led me to a lonely heart
To disorientated monsters
Full of wood
The Confusion in this room
Led to the traps of life
Containing spoons
Spoon of essence
Of essence of life
The Confusion
Led me
To find
What I seek
The Confusion
It found me
I found me
And now I’m awake
I remember
I remember
The Confusion

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  • lindalulu on Nov 15, 2008

    We all get confused sometimes. Good poem.

  • jackalina on Nov 15, 2008

    Good work, can see the message written in this poem.

  • Tmrobotix on Nov 15, 2008

    This poem was based on a dream I had when I were a child.
    Like we all know dreams are based on the things that happened in your life but mostly on what you thought of the last day.

    Therefore there might be a message in it because of that specific day however I did not intend to put a message in it.

    This is the first poem I’ve written based on a dream, my so-called Dreamproject now has officially begun!

  • gabbic1219 on Nov 15, 2008

    wonderful piece…i am a dream chaser for i believe dreams have an underlying statement or some prediction,not all but there are many that have a reason behind it,gabbi

  • Tmrobotix on Nov 16, 2008

    @Gabbic, dreams certainly have something in them.
    I’ll upload more Dreamproject poems later.
    And later when I’m done with the dreamproject I’ll write stories about the dreams I wrote poems about.

  • poetic enigma on Nov 16, 2008

    dreams can be very inspiring, and make for very good/interesting poems, just like this one was for you, great piece

  • Melody SJAL on Mar 10, 2009

    Nice piece.

  • Mr Ghaz on May 17, 2009

    Nice ones..Thats really lovely and well presented poem..LOV it..well done and thnx for sharing this great stuff.

  • Kristie Claar on Oct 28, 2011

    nice work

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