This is a man describing and comparing his love to many different things. Such as the sea, Petal, and how she is the perfect woman created by god.

Your lips like caramel,

And

Your skin like a peach blossom.

Continuously makes everyday sweeter than the next,

And more soothing to experience like the touch of a petal.

 

 

Your blue eye’s sparkles,

Like the smiling sea.

And

Your voice captivates,

Like the sweetest of sounds.

For everyday I find myself drowning in your love,

And being swooned away by it.

 

And I won’t leave or rest,

Until I express these emotions and,

My love burrows itself in the bosom of your heart.

For I can’t live without you,

You the perfect creation that god created.

 

 

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  • Shawn on Dec 21, 2010

    Nice work here you are a very talented artist man good luck in your future endeavorers

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