Humorous poem about a mean spirited critic.

The critic, oh the critic

You’re writing is verbose

It lacks in style and wit

It’s fluffy and awful

You’re just a hackless twit

Your imagery is lacking

Your grammar is a mess

Your writing has no passion

It has no zeal or zest

Give up on your vocation

Writing is not your bag

Don’t write another word

Just hoist the bright, white flag

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  • emmy19 on Jun 14, 2010

    Great article!!! I really like your article

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