A couplet composed of iambic pentameters meant to directly pronounce the effect of emotions and the space it leaves to the human nature of filling spaces. This is a direct and concise poem for the delirious.

Hunger fulfills the space of which love lacks.

But this is no cure, love only cures love.

(artwork by author)

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  • EK Encarnacion on Mar 1, 2010

    couplets and iambs –> very european.

    expert writers need little to no help from amateurs. ;)

    so what can I say about this poem? hmmm…

    short but
    truthful,
    meaningful and
    complete

  • Q Dionisio on Mar 1, 2010

    thanks for commenting ely. :)

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