The Dancing Flame

J Patrick Perry on Feb 24, 2012

Tags: candle, dancing, flame, Poetry

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2/23/2012.

A flame
So colorful

Flickering in the wind
In various directions

And showing no signs
Of letting up

For the time being

This colorful flame
Can dance
Freely and continuously

Atop the lit candle

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momofplenty on May 5, 2012
Very nice little poem. Liked
J Patrick Perry on May 6, 2012
momofplenty- Thank you. It’s very much appreciated. I honestly this poem of mine and I’m usually dissatisfied with my work.

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