A poem about an orphan coming of age.

~ The Darkness ~

The night was dark and quiet,
As she lay their in her bed.
Covered with a thin blanket.
No pillow for her head.
~
She’s been here in this orphanage,
For way to many years.
With nothing left from her past,
Except her painful tears.
~
On their way home from a party,
They had not driven that far.
Her parents were killed by a man,
Who was drunk and driving a car.
~
She had no family left,
So they put her in this home.
No one wants an older child.
She has nothing left to call her own.
~
She’ll finish high school in the spring.
Now she’s wondering what to do.
Soon she will be eighteen,
Her time here will be though.
~
Now she lays here in the darkness
With thoughts racing though her head.
What will life be like,
When she’s no longer here in this bed.

~Collette~
©Copyright 08-20-02

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  • cutedrishti8 on Sep 9, 2009

    Nice one ….Great work…

  • Emma Green on Sep 9, 2009

    Another great poem from you!!!

  • Nikita K on Sep 9, 2009

    As usual, you pack your poems with emotion and thought and the amount of effort and feelings in this is truly respectable. Good stuff.

  • ken bultman on Sep 9, 2009

    A sad story too often told.

  • Sourav on Sep 9, 2009

    Very emotional and sad. Nicely written.

  • Darla Cooke on Sep 9, 2009

    A very touching poem.

  • ashan1614 on Sep 9, 2009

    Yes, a sad story. Too many of our children are left in orphanages and foster care for one reason or another. Then at 18, they are shown the door, with no means to fend for themselves; no way to pay for a college education; no real hope for a future.

  • Lady Sunshine on Sep 9, 2009

    A sad reality for many…way too many abandoned or orphaned children in the world.

  • Birgit Niveaux on Sep 9, 2009

    this speaks for lots of children everywhere.

  • Jane Jane on Sep 10, 2009

    so true..=)

  • alc on Sep 10, 2009

    A great wrie thanks for the share!

  • lillyrose on Sep 10, 2009

    that was so fully of emotion and a very good poem, thank you Collette x

  • kizichat on Sep 10, 2009

    Something will come up as it always does. At least in movies. nice poem collete

  • ShadowPsychos on May 7, 2010

    grea write :)

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