Not having an emotion at the worst time.

He turns to look at me,
i look down.
He raises my chin,
he sees a frown.
He looks away.
I scream!
HOW COULD YOU DO IT?!
HOW?!
You stabbed me in the back!
I attacked.
Game over!
 You let this feeling die,
all i can do now is cry.
Is this what you wanted for me?
Please tell me,
what do you see?
All i see is you,
all you see is me,
Right?

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  • papaleng on Dec 10, 2008

    quite sad but you clearly expressed out your emotions. thanks for sharing

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