Frightening! Makes you think of the possibilities…

Scary, yet captivating. Great Poem!

Thanks for completing the poem and sharing it to us.

Thank you for your comments.

Great job at getting the emotion in… I only wish there was more to the story, you had me looking around the corner… LOL

I think we all have this demon. Some of us know him a little better than others do. Thanks for sharing this poem.

great share

This poem can be a metaphor for many struggles we deal with in life…good work

Thank you for your comments.

@bigpapadan I was indeed quite emotional when I started this,in a negative manner..I was actually so restless that I wasn’t able to complete it,and then I forgot about it.

@davanita Indeed.And some of us sort of “control” him,while some others are being controlled by him.

@Colleen It was indeed a metaphor,spot on.

I like your poem. I prefer to read about something dark with poetry. Thanks for sharing.

Thanks Michael.
You should check my blog http://vampirelles.blogspot.com
then,I’ve written some quite dark stuff,with more waiting to be released from the “pipeline” : )

i like this post

This one raises temperatures! I felt so frightened by this poem, a testimony that it was a well crafted piece! Thanks Sharpedon!

This is a great poem, very well composed! Thanks for sharing

A really well expressed poem. I think the demon is in us all.

Christine

Thank you for your kind comments,they are much appreciated.
@ gaby7 I have even more frightening stuff at the back of my head but I don’t publish them,I fear I will be censored :p

Great poem. It’s dark and suspenseful.

Temptation is a powerful thing. It takes more strength of will to fight against it than to give in, regardless of how much we want to.

I guess everybody has something dark within themselves lol… Its a good thing most of us can control these things. Enjoyed the read, thanks.

Well penned from the title to the finish. The feelings are vividly expressed.

I am impressed really , plz keep it up.

I am impressed really

Putting fire into words. A job well done. Thanks for the post Sharpedon.

Thank you for your kind and encouraging comments.
Sorry I have not been active here lately..

IT’S something i wanted to say……..too beautiful