Tanka – reflection.

When the rains had kissed
The desert which was his soul
He stopped to wonder
What seeds had there been planted
And what flowers would there grow

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  • tankermone on Feb 13, 2012

    Vivid imagery – wonderful!

  • Lisa Marie Mottert on Feb 13, 2012

    Very good! Strong image…
    Hope, you’re feeling better… glad to see you writing:)
    Thanks, for the share:)

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