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The Devil’s Whisper

fmakeita on Dec 3, 2009
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Used to feel this way when I was in my teenage years. Struggled out of it thanks from the support and understanding from friends and family. Things changed a lot after this..

I stay in my room

to avoid the devil’s whisper.

Because when I’m out it never bloom.

Instead it is always a disaster.

I get criticised, blame, and accused most of the time.

They’d always say that I did a crime.

For this the devil would whisper,

that this life don’t matter.

That I should end my life to be free.

I know & I know so well that this is a big fat lie.

If commit this dreadful sin,

I would be in pain for eternity.

And so I rush back into my room

to avoid the devil’s whisper.

When I’m out, I get stabbed on my back

a million times.

Yet nobody could hear my cries.

Again, I go back inside my room to weep &

avoid the devil’s whisper.

At times the devil’s whisper is quite strong,

Yet I fight it by reading the sacred scriptures..

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  • Netty net on Dec 3, 2009

    I glad you hear you that you are feeling better

  • drelayaraja on Dec 3, 2009

    Nicely written. Cute title too..

  • fmakeita on Dec 3, 2009

    Thanks you all :)

  • cutedrishti8 on Dec 3, 2009

    Very well written…

  • Black Enigma on Dec 3, 2009

    well done! the devil always lead us astray but keeping firm faith is the solution to our problems:)

  • diamondpoet on Dec 3, 2009

    Honey the devil doesn’t whisper, he is loud and very apparent, pick up your bible and laugh at him, then you won’t hear him anymore.

  • Darla Cooke on Dec 3, 2009

    Glad you’re feeling better now.

  • Billyfnstacy on Dec 3, 2009

    Good job on this one friend. Dont listen to him!!

  • fmakeita on Dec 3, 2009

    I actually pick up The Holy Quran :) thank you all for your support!

  • Themax on Dec 3, 2009

    lol @ dp!
    Thanks very well written friend :)

  • lonewolf13 on Dec 3, 2009

    Very nice! I often have to turn up the music to drown out his whispers… that or read a few chapters of the Bible! Just remember that you have more control than he does.

  • AlmaG on Dec 3, 2009

    A wonderful story showing strength and faith! :)

  • fmakeita on Dec 4, 2009

    Thanks a lot to all of you! I really appreciate all your supports and encouragements:)

  • Christine Ramsay on Dec 4, 2009

    I am so glad that you have come out of those feelings. A beautifully expressed piece.

    Christine

    http://authspot.com/poetry/help-ive-got-wrinkles-on-my-wrinkles/

  • mkd1788 on Dec 4, 2009

    u have expressed well…good one

  • fmakeita on Dec 4, 2009

    Thanks, I really appreciate it. The comments helps me know if someone likes my work or not.

  • PhoenixRox on Dec 5, 2009

    I have been there.. Deff. v should have been through it together. Would have been easier then..lol

  • deep blue on Dec 6, 2009

    The devil works in a lot silly and embarrassing ways and God will show his might in thousand, miracles that would surely bring great relief. Faith is something. I knew you have it.

  • PhoenixRox on Dec 23, 2009

    came back

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