The Disturbance

LOVELYHONEY on Jun 6, 2009

Some writes in roasted venomous anger, why read just pass over.

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The disturbance

Why I see some one so disturbed,

Can’t he himself get his views curbed?

It’s not necessary for anyone to read,

Poetry,

Compulsorily.

So why can’t you let it be?

Write your own poem,

Read them yourself,

Why others’ impressions,

You want to compress.

Life is young, a small journey,

Don’t write about Lovely Honey.

Your message across the globe,

Is torturous,

Apart from sour humor,

It appears venomous.

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Comments (9)

Darla Cooke on Jun 6, 2009
Interesting poem.
ken bultman on Jun 6, 2009
Tell it like it is.
QuinMonty86 on Jun 6, 2009
I don’t understand why people have to be so hateful!! I agree with you LH.
George W Whitehead on Jun 6, 2009
Who’s upset you, LH?
Sir Poetry on Jun 6, 2009
Whats wrong?
Kaavs on Jun 6, 2009
The Question ~ Who’s written against you,lh?
California Dreamer on Jun 7, 2009
An interesting poem, hope all is well?
Ramalingam on Jun 7, 2009
What happened to you ?
Betty Carew on Jun 8, 2009
Some things you just have to ignore or you get lost in the situation Lovely

Hi there!