The Ditch

Lex92 on Dec 27, 2008

Tags: car, Ditch, driveway, home, mind, road, snow

Sometimes driving in bad weather is very very bad.

It’s time to come home…
Yet, I don’t feel like going home is a good idea.
The snow is hitting my car hard…
So hard that I feel as though the roof is going break.
One thing comes after another
I can no longer see the road
It’s disappearing just like my mind
The snow keeps falling
The road gets even dimmer.
I crash into the ditch
Of my mind
Just as my car turns into the driveway

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Comments (14)

Mark Borg on Dec 27, 2008
Nice one! Wish I had snow in my country
nobert soloria bermosa on Dec 27, 2008
im glad you’re fine,that’s one of the bad effect of having winter,
Jasin on Dec 27, 2008
Nice work!
CutestPrincess on Dec 27, 2008
great… but i think it would be better if it\’s a lil\’ bit longer! but, really, it\’s great!
Reilley on Dec 27, 2008
I agree with Princess above, this is a cool idea that should be explored. Give us some details.
Louie Jerome on Dec 27, 2008
Great stuff Lexa!
Will Gray on Dec 27, 2008
Wow! Cool story!
Judy Sheldon on Dec 27, 2008
I was relieved that you did not end up in the ditch. I live in Michigan too so I know what it is like.

If I could I would gladly send it to Mark, but we’ll to act quick as it is melting today. lol

Take care & God bless.
R.B. Parsley on Dec 27, 2008
Moon Ride,
I hope you weren\’t hurt! Sometimes ditch\\\’s can put you in a world of hurt. Stay safe and stay out of the ditch\\\’s! Great poem! While you people in Michigan are having a lot of snow, we have 65 degree weather here, and no snow on the ground anywhere! And I live in Indiana!!! Keep up the great work and thank you for your comments Moon Ride!!!
Randy
Moses Ingram on Dec 27, 2008
Nice work,thanks for sharing.
Darlene McFarlane on Dec 27, 2008
I drove taxi for 16 years and I know how awful the weather can be, especially at night. I hope you weren’t hurt.

Good poem, you captured a horrible experience perfectly.
BC Doan on Dec 29, 2008
Very nice poem, Alexa! Happy Holiday to you and your family.
Bre on Dec 29, 2008
It’s perfect!
Jan K on Jan 7, 2009
Well that was certainly different but entertaining to be sure!

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