A witty poetic tribute to a fellow Triond member who had a few problems with his “Garage Door”…..He knows who he is…

The Dodgy Trouser Zip…

The Garage door is open,
I thought I felt a chill…
I wondered about the glances
as my pint I had refilled.
I really hadn’t realised,
that all down to a dodgy zip,
I was had up for exposure,
and got my bits frostnipped!
I really wouldn’t have minded,
but I now feel a kind of a ninny,
as the Jag, that was there this morning,
has been reduced down to a Mini!

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  • Christine Ramsay on Mar 10, 2011

    Ha ha! This is so funny. I do like your wit. You have made my morning.

  • SongbirdB on Mar 10, 2011

    Hi Christine! I thought this might amuse you my friend…It was a dare to see if I could come up with something regarding the sad tale of a dodgy zip…He wasn’t so impressed about the Mini bit though…hahahahahaha…Glad that I have made you laugh and made your morning for you…I’m really chuffed by that! lol Thanks so much for looking in ….

  • richardpeeej on Mar 10, 2011

    HAHAHA! What a hilarious poem Songbird my friend. I think I know the feeling your friend was going through when this happened it does get a bit chilly ..lol

  • SongbirdB on Mar 11, 2011

    Thanks Richard, this was just a bit of fun to write, but I am so glad it is making others smile too….You sound like you speak from experience my friend…lol..

  • serenitybubble on Mar 14, 2011

    :) , i like it alot!

  • Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Mar 20, 2011

    Hahahahahahaha! Love it! Jag to a mini. Fabulous.

  • SongbirdB on Mar 21, 2011

    Thank you Serenitybubble and Jerry Atrixx, for posting comments, I am really glad that you enjoyed!

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