A friend using her pain to comfort.

quiet perfection

eloquent beauty

exquisite, lovely and serene

tattered and numb from storms unknown

a distant, tortured heart

untended, uncared for

a cruel brick laid with each day

a high, proud wall built

hiding her tenderness

protecting her vulnerability

who would dare blame her

has she forgotten that precious innocent girl

in the suffering, has she lost her self forever

sweet gifts unseen

joys unknown

passions withheld

yet she knows my pain as if it were hers

she wakes and comforts my soul

although battered, she tends to my bruises

through her wounds, she restores me

drawing me behind her precious walls

she holds and protects

through the crumbling stone and mortar she touches me

she loves me

and slays the dragon

 

Perfección silenciosa

Belleza elocuente

Exquisito, amorosoy sereno

Harapiento y  adormecido por tormentas desconocidas

A distancia, corazón torturado

Sin atención, sin cuidados por

El cruel ladrillo colocado con cada día

Una alta y orgullosa pared construida

Esconde su suavidad

Protegiendo su vulnerabilidad

Uquien dudaría en hecharle la culpa

Se ha olvidado ella de esa preciosa e inocente niña

En el sufrimieno, se ha perdido ella para siempre

Dulces regalos no vistos

Alegrías desconocidas

Paciones retenidas

Aunque conoce mi dolor como si fuera de ella

Ella se levanta y consuela mi alma

Aunque abatida, ella cuida de mis golpes

A través de sus heridas, ella me restablece

Llevándome detrás de su preciosas paredes

 Ella me mantiene y protégé

A través de las piedras caídas y morteros ella me toca

Ella me ama

Y mata al dragón

 

 

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  • heidiefernandez on Jun 7, 2010

    Very lovely piece!!! Emotions are very real!!! liked it!!! no….
    I love it..

  • Tom Woodside on Jun 7, 2010

    good portrayal of courage and love

  • Christine Ramsay on Jun 7, 2010

    Such a beautiful and emotional piece. You portray feelings so well.

    Christine

  • Atanacio on Jun 7, 2010

    a very good strong write enjoyed it very much

  • sara20 on Jun 7, 2010

    Excellent manner and very well-written sentence is doing, with useful information includes a good things you have in your article.

    Thanks and cheers.
    Sara

  • papaleng on Jun 8, 2010

    Wow! that was so lovely. I love the flow.

  • write4money on Jun 12, 2010

    Nice piece.

    Good information is available here, and keeps on writing.

    Anjalina.

  • Yalonda on Jun 18, 2010

    A very touching poem!
    She must be a very special person to you!

  • giftarist on Jun 20, 2010

    Poignant piece. I like this one!

  • crisdiwata on Nov 19, 2010

    Very heartfelt piece!

  • harrella0187 on Sep 9, 2011

    Simpatico!

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