There is love; then there is life; then there is heaven.

Remember the dream that sparkled so
We pledged our love and never let go
Then we were so young what did we know
Of world without care outside our glow
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So lost in our love what did we care
So much to give and so much to share
So many hopes awaited us there
So time did test how much we could bear
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Soon we found out that love can hurt so
Confusion and doubt had much to share
To bruise and tear at what remained there
Yet in the bleak night there was a glow
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We spouted out words without a care
A chance to cause pain we let it go
And what about love we didn’t know
Beyond this kiss how much could we bear
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Somehow we found our forgotten glow
Were we that couple we used to know
What happened to them where did they go
Remember the dream that sparkled so

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  • Ruby Hawk on Aug 11, 2012

    Oh, I don’t know, where did they go? You said it well.

  • marqjonz on Aug 11, 2012

    Excellent poem. I doff my hat to your intricate work with the words at the ends of lines.

  • jennifer eiffel01 on Aug 11, 2012

    Wonderful!

  • lauralu on Aug 11, 2012

    Beautiful !

  • lovebytes on Aug 11, 2012

    You have a knack for beautiful words.

  • Jswana on Aug 11, 2012

    Beautiful and though-provoking too. I love it. Thanks for sharing :)

  • Tiki33 on Aug 11, 2012

    Love can be a wonderful emotion if people just knew how to respect it.

  • mishee on Aug 11, 2012

    Nice poem. Thanks for sharing.

  • herjave01 on Aug 11, 2012

    When the spark went out, where do they go indeed.

  • smokychristine on Aug 12, 2012

    Young love is so often painful.

  • Anuja Deshmukh on Aug 12, 2012

    beautiful…. great work… simple sweet and touching…. very well knitted

  • webseowriters on Aug 12, 2012

    wonderful

  • Sharif Ishnin on Aug 12, 2012

    Lovely poem.Just like beauty which fades.

  • joanofark on Aug 12, 2012

    Yook me back!

  • Donnah Clark on Aug 12, 2012

    Ah, how time flies. Great poem! Love it!

  • Paul Kurt on Aug 12, 2012

    Hay my friend did you know that if you play the music and read your work it makes it as beautifull as it is well written.Seasons of love so nice

  • Kharla Jolly on Aug 12, 2012

    A very touching poem, a beautiful writing of past gone by. Most of us have experiences these things and many relationships get thrown out. Some of us keep trying, our reward being a revived friendship.

  • elee on Aug 12, 2012

    Well written. Thank you.

  • Raj the Tora on Aug 16, 2012

    So true, “so much to give and so much to share” !!!

    Nothing else can express love so lovely!

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