I was just scribbling and then when I read it, I found it rhymed!..

The dudes of the Sea,

Who, at night, walk by the shore,

Once, called out to me,

And what a fool, I was to go!

They wanted me to join them,

Oh! How could I refuse?

Their handsome, cool attires,

And their outstanding looks!

I started that very night,

And what a night it was, Oh man!

We just had to keep walking,

On the never-changing sand.

It went on for years and years,

Until finally, I retired.

I told them, by another group,

I had just been hired.

Oh! That was not true,

And it never will be,

For I’m not joining any other group,

I always want to be free!

Hope this poem gave you something to laugh at!.. 

Don’t forget to leave a comment..  :)

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  • Starpisces on Jun 7, 2010

    very nice, and yes, rhymes well, well done, friend.
    :P

  • sasuke191 on Jun 7, 2010

    Thnx starpisces!!.. ^^

  • priyaa on Jun 7, 2010

    Very well presented post Thanks.

  • Atanacio on Jun 7, 2010

    this was very well written good job

  • sasuke191 on Jun 7, 2010

    Thank you for reading!.. I’m glad you all liked the poem!.. :)

  • sara20 on Jun 7, 2010

    Excellent manner and very well-written sentence is doing, with useful information includes a good things you have in your article.

    Thanks and cheers.
    Sara

  • V rank on Jun 7, 2010

    you are a funny guy… keep doing what you are doing… good job in here…

  • Eunice Tan on Jun 7, 2010

    So nice… wonderfully written

  • sasuke191 on Jun 8, 2010

    Thank you for reading this poem.. ;) I’m a kind of fan of funny poetry..

  • papaleng on Jun 8, 2010

    I enjoy reading every lines of your poem. you are a man of humor.

  • sasuke191 on Jun 8, 2010

    Nice to hear that… ^^
    Actually, from some of my poetry, many people think that I’m a boy, but that is because I put myself in the shoes of the character, which in some cases is a boy and in some is a girl.. But papaleng and franklin, I’m a girl.. :)
    Just thought I should tell you all.. ^^

  • Temjen Imchen on Jun 8, 2010

    Actor in the guise of a poet! Lol. Nice poem.

  • sasuke191 on Jun 8, 2010

    Hehe!.. Thank you Temjen.. :)

  • Mifra Khan on Jun 9, 2010

    amazing!!! i can’t believe that u can write such a nice poem even when u don’t know it…..

  • giftarist on Jun 9, 2010

    :) Well penned piece. Nice share!

  • sasuke191 on Jun 10, 2010

    Thanks, both of you, for reading!.. Hope it was able to give you all a laugh.. :)

  • Belinda Dobie on Jun 28, 2010

    Nice poem.

  • sasuke191 on Jun 29, 2010

    Thank you!.. ^^

  • EricPinola on Jun 29, 2010

    I have never been a poet; bu this was good. I thought it was about surfing initially…………..

    Eric Pinola

  • sasuke191 on Jun 29, 2010

    Haha!… Yeah, the name kind of makes it looks like that!… Thanks for reading!.. Glad you enjoyed it!!.. ^^

  • Phoenix Montoya on Jul 1, 2010

    Nice… Great rhymes! Liked it!

  • sasuke191 on Jul 2, 2010

    Thnx!.. ^^

  • Joseph Scott on Jul 31, 2010

    Nice poem/story! :)

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