The Eclipse

Teves on Nov 11, 2009

Tags: astronomy, Eclipse, Eclipses Occultations and Transits

Eclipse.

I stand in the open cold
And watch the essence of the eclipse
Which is perfect darkness.
I stand in the cold on the porch
Could not think of anything so perfect
The mans hope of light in the face of darkness.

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Hansika on Nov 11, 2009
nice one
LoveDoctor on Nov 11, 2009
good one.
Jane Benitez on Nov 11, 2009
There is always light but sometimes we have to put forth the effort. Very nice poem.
Priyanka Bhowmick on Nov 12, 2009
well writen
wonder on Nov 12, 2009
You are stealing all the ideas, what shall we write about?Great work!
goindia on Nov 12, 2009
Nice pic and even a Better Thought…
Linda Lori on Nov 12, 2009
Love your take on this.
Petalm on Nov 12, 2009
Very good writing, you have talent!
AlmaG on Nov 12, 2009
Wonderful poem Teves ^_^
Starpisces on Nov 12, 2009
a short but well written poem
Kristina Angel on Nov 12, 2009
excellente!
lillyrose on Nov 12, 2009
great poem, I saw an eclipse a very weird thing to see, quite airy.
giftarist on Nov 12, 2009
Nice piece, thought provoking!
Darla Cooke on Nov 12, 2009
Great poem and pic!
Judi Eddy on Nov 12, 2009
Lovely words and amazing picture
drelayaraja on Nov 12, 2009
I love this poem. Well written.
mathurans on Nov 12, 2009
Beauty…
Frances Lawrence on Nov 12, 2009
Simply beautiful!
Darlene McFarlane on Nov 12, 2009
Very nicely written.
abhishek40914 on Nov 12, 2009
good one
cebuanaeyez on Nov 12, 2009
Wonderful piece and the picture is amazing!
LOVELYHONEY on Nov 12, 2009
nice very nice lovely
Ruby Hawk on Nov 12, 2009
Love it, well done.
strovek on Nov 12, 2009
great poem.
Diverseblogger on Nov 12, 2009
Very creative and different poem! Keep up the great work
LovelyWolf on Nov 13, 2009
That was beautiful!

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