A tragic fall.

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The darkness had already taken hold,

her heart was cold,

as she plummeted down the shaft,

she screamed as she plunged,

her face filled with fear,

the bottom was near,

as she was clawing at thin air,

as if she could dig fingers into it,

at one point,

she felt her frantic hands

brush against the shaft wall,

as she continued the fall,

the wall was hideously smooth,

thin grooves,

and nothing for her to grip,

her heart would dip.

Her mind would drip,

as she continued the downward trip,

it seemed as if the fall took forever,

but it was in fact, only seconds,

her ears popped,

then she stopped,

no breath,

just death.

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Comments (7)
  • loualbert on Nov 17, 2009

    A very tragic poem with a very sad end, and all I can say is that I feel for any person who finds himself in that situation.

    Please, spread the news that I`m back on the site.

  • Teves on Nov 17, 2009

    Nice post…

  • Hansika on Nov 17, 2009

    thanks for the share

  • Sammy2000 on Nov 17, 2009

    frankie this was oddly funny

  • Lady Sunshine on Nov 17, 2009

    Was she pushed? *shudders again*

  • Aleena on Nov 17, 2009

    Cringe-inspiring :D
    Love the description, really great job.

  • willie wondka on Nov 20, 2009

    you have similar poems to my ones to my lift poem, good read.

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