The End of Our Chapter

Alvin Lim on Nov 26, 2008

Tags: Life, love, poem, relationship

A poem dedicated to someone I used to love for three years.

We used to look at the same sky,
even though we were miles apart.
We shared the same laughter and sorrow,
even though you were always not by my side.
And whenever you said you were lonely, I would accompany you,
even though we were in different parts of the world.
But that was how things used to be,
and that was the end of our chapter.
You’ve found your new love.
I’m glad, though I’m also sad,
that I wasn’t the chosen one.
Yet, you will still have my blessings.
Sorry about the mistakes I’ve done in the past,
sorry for the moments I’ve made you sad,
and sorry for not being able to turn up,
for the most important day of your life – your wedding.

Sorry if this poem sounds horrible (I know it sounds very weird). It’s my first attempt in writing a poem. I actually have a comic related to our story, posted in my blog. The girl is someone I used to love for 3 years. She didn’t accept me, but I was nearly there. Anyway, as stated in the poem, she’s getting married soon – end of November 2008. That signals the end of our chapter, and that’s what this poem is all about.

I just want to wish her all the best.

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S A JOHNSON on Nov 26, 2008
This poem is not horrible or weird. It is really really good, I love the way you told you told. I thought it was sad but very romantic. ^_^
S A JOHNSON on Nov 26, 2008
lol typo…I love the way you told it.**
Alvin Lim on Nov 26, 2008
S A JOHNSON : Thanks for the kind words. Now that I read it again, it does sound a bit weird. LOL.
Alvin Lim on Nov 26, 2008
S A JOHNSON : Thanks for the kind words. Now that I read it again, it does sound a bit weird. LOL.
Alvin Lim on Nov 26, 2008
Oops, sorry for the double post. Internet acting weird.
S A JOHNSON on Nov 27, 2008
LOL yeah for some reason I had to write my comment like four times just to get here. AND your poem does NOT sound weird at all to me. ^_^ I’m not just being kind, I really like it.
eddiego65 on Nov 27, 2008
The poem is really nice! I don\’t have the gift of writing poems. And even if I try writing one, my poem won\’t be half as good as yours! Great job.
Alvin Lim on Nov 27, 2008
S A JOHNSON : Thanks

eddiego65 : Thanks for the kind words. I don’t really have gift in writing poems too.
Linda Tan on Nov 28, 2008
touching..
chin woon on Nov 29, 2008
like wat u wrote..^_^..
Alvin Lim on Nov 30, 2008
Linda : Thanks

Chin Woon : Ask your boyfriend to write one for you
Ying Hoong on Dec 1, 2008
You are really good in expressing your life story into words and comic…very creative in the way of how you elaborate your own feeling. I wish I have this kind of talent too…^_^
Alvin Lim on Dec 1, 2008
Ying Hoong : Thanks You can draw quite well also right? Maybe even better than me

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