A poem about the invisible and silent enemies within ourselves.

       We all have enemies inside

       Which fill our souls with endless pride

      And sometimes make us be so blind

      That even if there’s light to find

      And all we need is just a spark

      We can’t find ways out of the dark

     That keeps us lost,with no direction

     No help around and no protection.

      Those inner demons in our brain

       Can easily drive us insane

      If they catch us in their evil spell

       And turn our lives into black hell.

       However,we must  try to fight

       And to defeat the endless night

       To bring the sorrow to an end

       To search and find help in a friend

        And get rid of the evil ghouls

       That poison our hearts and souls!

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Comments (13)
  • omGas on Jun 17, 2011

    … and outside.

  • adhiiw4hyu on Jun 17, 2011

    great

  • Muhammad Fajar Marthias on Jun 17, 2011

    very good

  • Dreamy777 on Jun 17, 2011

    great one

  • Ebbin Jose on Jun 17, 2011

    The biggest enemy of a human is his self. And if one can conquer him, he is the winner.

  • Melanie T on Jun 17, 2011

    great poem

  • Inzimam on Jun 17, 2011

    nice share…

  • cyni1106 on Jun 17, 2011

    That was beautifully done, great expression, I really enjoyed it.

  • papaleng on Jun 18, 2011

    nicely-penned and good message.

  • yellow rose on Jun 19, 2011

    Beautiful…Your poems are inspired from reality and always transmitted a strong message…thanks for share…

  • neopisiva on Jun 21, 2011

    We all need to learn how to deal with our enemies and win over them.

  • KittyK on Sep 10, 2011

    Great poetry with such deep and humble information…

  • ladym33 on Oct 19, 2011

    Very good poem.

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