The Enigma

Cebah on Mar 28, 2009

Poetry, love, relationships, courtship.

Tempt me with your words of wisdom -

An ancient ethos borne from pain.

Flights of fancy and games of wit,

Beautiful patterns taught to train.

~.~

Talk with me for hours on end

Share with me your timeless grace

Laugh with me at life’s hard lessons

Set the tempo, the time and place.

~.~

Touch me, kiss me, play me, tease me –

Crush me, love me, try me, please me!

~.~

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Comments (17)

hnt456 on Apr 14, 2009
Like it!!
Theresa Johnson on Jul 30, 2009
good work. i like it
shelly barclay on Jul 30, 2009
Good job.
maranatha on Jul 30, 2009
Interesting view of the mind as the courtship dance begins.
Katie Marie on Jul 30, 2009
Yes, I see it all here, poetry, love, relationship and courtship. Enjoying the joyful rhythm of the piece.
littlemama76 on Jul 30, 2009
love it! great job!
David Crerand on Jul 30, 2009
I love the tone of the invitation.
Marie Milton on Jul 30, 2009
Beautifully composed…well done!
Marie Milton on Jul 30, 2009
Here’s another comment for the record…hehehe
DriftingInsomnia on Jul 30, 2009
Loved the rhyme and all: picture compliments the piece.
Karen Gross on Jul 31, 2009
So begins the dance…
Brenda Nelson on Jul 31, 2009
tempting enjoyment, great poem.
Mark Gordon Brown on Jul 31, 2009
Nice use of word wit and rhymne.
Alina Beck on Aug 2, 2009
What a wonderful invitation!
TroostAvenue on Nov 11, 2009
Wow. SheBear, that’s really good. What was the basis, what the inspiration. I just read it again and agree with myself.
TroostAvenue on Nov 14, 2009
Read again several days later. To my mind still one of the best poems I seen on this site.
Sage Williams on Jan 24, 2010
Nice really nice, love the ending

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