A Christmas haiku.

Christ came to our world
God’s precious gift to mankind -
Divine Immanuel

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  • ken bultman on Dec 18, 2009

    Perfect Christmas haiku. Good job.

  • PR Mace on Dec 18, 2009

    Amen sister and Merry Christmas.

  • Kate Smedley on Dec 18, 2009

    Absolutely beautiful, perfect haiku for Christmas.

  • Glynis Smy on Dec 18, 2009

    Great job.

  • Lady Sunshine on Dec 18, 2009

    Perfect indeed, Melody.

  • Teves on Dec 18, 2009

    Great work…

  • Eunice Tan on Dec 19, 2009

    Agree

  • SharifaMcFarlane on Dec 19, 2009

    Short and spicy

  • Christine Ramsay on Dec 19, 2009

    That is such a perfect piece for this season. Well done.

    Christine

  • papaleng on Dec 19, 2009

    well-timed Haiku.. Merry Christmas Melody.

  • Darla Cooke on Dec 19, 2009

    Beautiful haiku!

  • Goodselfme on Dec 19, 2009

    Wonderful, delightful! TX

  • Faith Hodge on Dec 19, 2009

    Peace On Earth and Good Will to Men. Perfectly complete Haiku.
    Hope your holidays are the same! Liz….

  • xoxo on Dec 20, 2009

    Yes, Christ is our gift. The salvation of mankind. Merry Christmas, Melody. A very nice haiku.

  • Joe Dorish on Dec 20, 2009

    Timely and lovely Haiku!

  • CA Johnson on Dec 20, 2009

    This is a beautiful Christmas haiku.

  • Poetic Enigma on Dec 20, 2009

    Lovely message of
    Christmas,
    In a beautiful Haiku.
    Thanks for sharing (:

  • deep blue on Dec 20, 2009

    The message is clearly understood. Christmas is God’s gift to mankind by sending his son to save us.

  • Ruby Hawk on Dec 20, 2009

    well done,

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Dec 23, 2009

    Merry christmas! I hope you’ve a great time then.

  • gaby7 on Dec 25, 2009

    Indeed! Thanks

  • gaby7 on Dec 25, 2009

    That will for ever remain the reason Christ came to this world. Thanks

  • Inna Tysoe on Dec 25, 2009

    Merry Christmas to you and yours.

    Inna

  • Colleen Ranney on Dec 27, 2009

    sweet

  • jaysonv on Dec 28, 2009

    what a lovely post.. thanks!

  • qasimdharamsy on Jan 7, 2010

    wonderful … great job….

  • Alicia Wind on Jan 13, 2010

    aww…that was cute.

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