The Indian Ocean is located in the East. There have been some questions to know if the sun raises in the East or the West. Japan is often called the country of the raising sun.

The hot streams that flow

in the Indian Ocean inform

us about your generous flow

and you are there uniform

and ready to fly when the flow

of hot streams come up storm

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  • amandeep13 on Feb 24, 2010

    Brilliant Write

    Best Regards.

  • shawnn0011235 on Feb 24, 2010

    a13: i really REALLY like it!! I look “up” in trail to see you, and it is warmest to my right hand side. So, to follow the sunshine to see you, I go to the left.That direction is to the West. Then I see Hawaii island and eat a pineapple. Then I take boat with pineapples to see Osaka after boat. Then I go fishing with Okinawa or Pillipines teachers of fishing. I like fishing. (Do you like fish? I smoke some fish for you and bring it just in case). Then I go to Java to see temple. I learned of temple from bubzbeauty web site and maybe other websites too. I maybe sleep in temple if it is too noisy but I don’t know if that is OK. I hear no camping some places (not safe or something…). (Oh, I know. Should not draw attention with big backpacks–too much to carry for person who like to visit temples)! Then from Java I float maybe to Thailand islands. Then more fish and wait. Then when holiday on island (moon festival) I bring tourists to Bangkok. I take motorbike to Chiang Mai and learn to find my way to pilgrim train. Then I meet you if I find you by reading signs. I like it. Hope you are having beautiful day. Your friend 0011235 :)

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