Comments on: The Final Slip http://authspot.com/poetry/the-final-slip/ Sun, 22 Nov 2009 06:07:06 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 By: William L Domme http://authspot.com/poetry/the-final-slip/comment-page-1/#comment-519047 William L Domme Tue, 30 Dec 2008 20:56:06 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/the-final-slip/#comment-519047 This part is vivid to the point of exploding:<br /> <br /> "The clouds began to brewing<br /> Something horrid for the night<br /> A thing that I can't mention<br /> A moment void of light"<br /> <br /> The last two lines clinched it with great effect.<br /> <br /> May your pen always be light. This part is vivid to the point of exploding:

“The clouds began to brewing
Something horrid for the night
A thing that I can’t mention
A moment void of light”

The last two lines clinched it with great effect.

May your pen always be light.

]]> By: Randy Bernat http://authspot.com/poetry/the-final-slip/comment-page-1/#comment-519045 Randy Bernat Wed, 24 Dec 2008 17:24:47 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/the-final-slip/#comment-519045 Neat. I like it a lot. Neat. I like it a lot.

]]> By: G. Grissom http://authspot.com/poetry/the-final-slip/comment-page-1/#comment-519043 G. Grissom Sat, 27 Sep 2008 06:24:45 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/the-final-slip/#comment-519043 Excellent. Full of emotion. I love it, Josey! Excellent. Full of emotion. I love it, Josey!

]]> By: Darlene McFarlane http://authspot.com/poetry/the-final-slip/comment-page-1/#comment-519041 Darlene McFarlane Wed, 17 Sep 2008 02:58:18 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/the-final-slip/#comment-519041 This is a good one, Josey with a lot of meaning. This is a good one, Josey with a lot of meaning.

]]> By: quiet voice http://authspot.com/poetry/the-final-slip/comment-page-1/#comment-519039 quiet voice Fri, 12 Sep 2008 20:58:06 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/the-final-slip/#comment-519039 ..Hi Josey, wonderfully written, and very strong. ?Have you published any of your work? If not, you should. Take care. ..Hi Josey, wonderfully written, and very strong. ?Have you published any of your work? If not, you should. Take care.

]]> By: Wordsfrommyheart http://authspot.com/poetry/the-final-slip/comment-page-1/#comment-519037 Wordsfrommyheart Fri, 12 Sep 2008 17:37:20 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/the-final-slip/#comment-519037 Whoa, may I sigh at this. I am really moved by your poem. You have truly. excellent writing skills. I am going to be looking out for your work. This is so meaningful and your description is wonderful. Keep writing sweetie. Whoa, may I sigh at this. I am really moved by your poem. You have truly. excellent writing skills. I am going to be looking out for your work. This is so meaningful and your description is wonderful. Keep writing sweetie.

]]> By: picquet http://authspot.com/poetry/the-final-slip/comment-page-1/#comment-519035 picquet Fri, 12 Sep 2008 08:43:43 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/the-final-slip/#comment-519035 it does make you think, a good read Josey<br /> <br /> Paul it does make you think, a good read Josey

Paul

]]> By: william rodriguez II http://authspot.com/poetry/the-final-slip/comment-page-1/#comment-519033 william rodriguez II Fri, 12 Sep 2008 08:04:54 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/the-final-slip/#comment-519033 meaningful poem meaningful poem

]]> By: UNofre Pili http://authspot.com/poetry/the-final-slip/comment-page-1/#comment-519031 UNofre Pili Thu, 11 Sep 2008 23:33:55 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/the-final-slip/#comment-519031 A profound work. Great symbolism. A profound work. Great symbolism.

]]> By: nobert soloria bermosa http://authspot.com/poetry/the-final-slip/comment-page-1/#comment-519029 nobert soloria bermosa Thu, 11 Sep 2008 17:58:06 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/the-final-slip/#comment-519029 nicely written poem,and meaningful as well, nicely written poem,and meaningful as well,

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