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The First Time

Lady Sunshine on Nov 16, 2009
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The joy of discovering…

Adam and Eve play
Discovering each other
Love awakening

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  • cardy on Nov 16, 2009

    Lovely work! liked it

  • Themax on Nov 16, 2009

    niceeeeee work,very sweet!!!

  • ken bultman on Nov 16, 2009

    Wow. Talk about originality.

  • Atanacio on Nov 16, 2009

    very well done :)

  • Teves on Nov 16, 2009

    Very interesting…Hi Sunshine!

  • Shirley Shuler on Nov 16, 2009

    Hi Lady Sunshine, so much said in so few words, well done my friend!

  • papaleng on Nov 17, 2009

    so short but you have completely expressed a universal truth.

  • V rank on Nov 18, 2009

    Well-packed thought in a haiku….!

  • LOVELYHONEY on Nov 18, 2009

    where are they

    i would like to thank them

    for keeping me busy

  • deep blue on Nov 19, 2009

    I suppose that’s quite incomplete. Adam should have eaten the forbidden fruit prelude to the love awakening. So by now I suppose you enjoy munching those apples my dear. ‘Gives a feeling of heaven before our first kind were banned out of paradise.

  • drelayaraja on Nov 23, 2009

    Great discovery, isn’t?

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