Comments on: The First Time http://authspot.com/poetry/the-first-time-20/ Thu, 16 Feb 2012 07:24:19 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 By: drelayaraja http://authspot.com/poetry/the-first-time-20/comment-page-1/#comment-1022885 drelayaraja Mon, 23 Nov 2009 16:46:35 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/the-first-time-20/#comment-1022885 Great discovery, isn't? Great discovery, isn’t?

]]> By: deep blue http://authspot.com/poetry/the-first-time-20/comment-page-1/#comment-1015053 deep blue Thu, 19 Nov 2009 11:30:50 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/the-first-time-20/#comment-1015053 I suppose that's quite incomplete. Adam should have eaten the forbidden fruit prelude to the love awakening. So by now I suppose you enjoy munching those apples my dear. 'Gives a feeling of heaven before our first kind were banned out of paradise. I suppose that’s quite incomplete. Adam should have eaten the forbidden fruit prelude to the love awakening. So by now I suppose you enjoy munching those apples my dear. ‘Gives a feeling of heaven before our first kind were banned out of paradise.

]]> By: LOVELY HONEY http://authspot.com/poetry/the-first-time-20/comment-page-1/#comment-1014128 LOVELY HONEY Wed, 18 Nov 2009 19:38:52 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/the-first-time-20/#comment-1014128 where are they i would like to thank them for keeping me busy where are they

i would like to thank them

for keeping me busy

]]> By: Franklin http://authspot.com/poetry/the-first-time-20/comment-page-1/#comment-1013415 Franklin Wed, 18 Nov 2009 13:35:57 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/the-first-time-20/#comment-1013415 Well-packed thought in a haiku....! Well-packed thought in a haiku….!

]]> By: papaleng http://authspot.com/poetry/the-first-time-20/comment-page-1/#comment-1011223 papaleng Tue, 17 Nov 2009 10:43:28 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/the-first-time-20/#comment-1011223 so short but you have completely expressed a universal truth. so short but you have completely expressed a universal truth.

]]> By: Shirley Shuler http://authspot.com/poetry/the-first-time-20/comment-page-1/#comment-1010723 Shirley Shuler Tue, 17 Nov 2009 02:29:22 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/the-first-time-20/#comment-1010723 Hi Lady Sunshine, so much said in so few words, well done my friend! Hi Lady Sunshine, so much said in so few words, well done my friend!

]]> By: Teves http://authspot.com/poetry/the-first-time-20/comment-page-1/#comment-1010527 Teves Mon, 16 Nov 2009 22:42:50 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/the-first-time-20/#comment-1010527 Very interesting...Hi Sunshine! Very interesting…Hi Sunshine!

]]> By: Atanacio http://authspot.com/poetry/the-first-time-20/comment-page-1/#comment-1010397 Atanacio Mon, 16 Nov 2009 21:15:07 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/the-first-time-20/#comment-1010397 very well done :) very well done :)

]]> By: ken bultman http://authspot.com/poetry/the-first-time-20/comment-page-1/#comment-1009945 ken bultman Mon, 16 Nov 2009 15:41:18 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/the-first-time-20/#comment-1009945 Wow. Talk about originality. Wow. Talk about originality.

]]> By: Themax http://authspot.com/poetry/the-first-time-20/comment-page-1/#comment-1009885 Themax Mon, 16 Nov 2009 15:09:49 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/the-first-time-20/#comment-1009885 niceeeeee work,very sweet!!! niceeeeee work,very sweet!!!

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