The loneliness of growing old.

The dogwood pedals snowing down
She looks down at her tile blue ground
She longs to feel the breeze outside
Inside these walls they make her hide
Forgotten beauty left alone
Turns her head to a distant moan
There are no laughs to ease the day
Her family saw no other way
Afraid of all the harm she’d face
Her life from her was soon erased
Her hands are swollen mounds of pain
But still she weaves in blissful strain
For this is all she has these days
The time she has is close, she prays
The last pedal floats to the ground
As silence closes all around

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  • Glynis on Jul 22, 2008

    simply beautiful words that portray so much, I felt a silent dignity surround me while reading this,I could feel sadness, thank you for sharing

  • lanne on Jul 22, 2008

    Beautiful poem Josey. I agree with Glynis 100%.

  • Sun Meilan on Jul 22, 2008

    Me too, beautiful words.

  • Carissa Allan on Jul 22, 2008

    Beautiful poem Josey. Your words made me feel her sadness as if it were my own.

  • Ruby Hawk on Jul 22, 2008

    Expressed so well, Josey.

  • Rachel Faye on Jul 23, 2008

    You have such a beautiful way of putting your words together.

  • Dee Huff on Jul 23, 2008

    Very touching.

  • Josey on Jul 23, 2008

    Thank you so much, ladies. I have been out of town on vacation with my family and haven’t written anything for a while. It’s nice to get back into it. Your support means so much.

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Jul 23, 2008

    nice poem and welcome back Josey

  • Eden Emersen on Jul 24, 2008

    I like your voice of compassion and empathy.

  • The Quail on Jul 26, 2008

    Namaste again well done.

  • Carol H on Aug 5, 2008

    So very touching…beautifully written.

  • G. Grissom on Aug 9, 2008

    The way you put words together amazes me so much! You make the reader feel as if he were there, and feeling and seeing exactly what you are saying. It’s awesome!

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