When you feel you don’t belong here……….

Tired of his own creation,

God thought about having some fun

Picking someone up from a completely different world

He shoved her into this globe

Rest of his days passed in merriment

Watching the poor fight back her existence

She wailed, she complained

She was, but not one of them

Yet up in the heavenly abode

He wouldn’t stop the game.

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Comments (8)
  • Themax on Nov 3, 2009

    Beautiful poem!!
    Thanks for sharing :)

  • Teves on Nov 3, 2009

    Nice poem…

  • Darla Cooke on Nov 3, 2009

    Interesting poem.

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 3, 2009

    I enjoyed that one. well done/

    Christine

  • Goodselfme on Nov 4, 2009

    Very deep writing with many messages within.TX

  • giftarist on Nov 4, 2009

    Nice thoughts!

  • lillyrose on Nov 4, 2009

    Very good poem, your feelings shine through!

  • Jenny Heart on Nov 5, 2009

    Deep indeed!

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