She found out her husband was cheating
The tears and the whys now repeating
Oh she took it hard
And yes she’ll be scarred
Explains why at cards she took beating

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  • jennifer eiffel01 on Aug 3, 2012

    This poor lady. I would never let a guy win at a game. I have not played any games for a long time with my mom. Thanks for reminding me

  • lovebytes on Aug 3, 2012

    there are too many players out there. men dont always reveal their marital status or true identity. I feel bad for those weak minded girls out there.

  • Jswana on Aug 3, 2012

    Such a clever Poem. So cute. She looks like that actress Deanna Durbin too, who by the way is one of the last living from that era. :)

  • sha4nny on Aug 3, 2012

    Wow, deep and beautiful!

  • stevetheblogger on Aug 3, 2012

    Martin so few words but magic
    Best Wishes

  • Lisa Marie Mottert on Aug 3, 2012

    Well written Limerick…very sad.
    Thanks for sharing and your support:)

  • smokychristine on Aug 4, 2012

    Well written. Thanks.

  • AINIEE on Aug 4, 2012

    i really dont understand,, what people can get by cheat…people are shit…

  • observer1 on Aug 4, 2012

    Reading the comments you touched a nerve – as always!

  • elee on Aug 4, 2012

    Quite,exactly.Of course.

  • Steven West on Aug 4, 2012

    Well written limerick.

  • Margaret Boseroy on Aug 6, 2012

    Aww…That’s terrible! Poor thing…

  • Derdriu on Aug 6, 2012

    Martin, Perhaps she needs to get some tips from “Where there’s a pill (there’s a way)”!
    Respectfully, and with many thanks for sharing, Derdriu

  • avissado on Aug 6, 2012

    liked it!

  • Secre22 on Aug 7, 2012

    Should look on it as she deserves better!

  • SharifaMcFarlane on Aug 7, 2012

    Good choice of image too

  • Tiki33 on Aug 7, 2012

    That can bring tears to ones eyes.

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