I have one, don’t you?

Do you think it odd
That I have poems in my trees?
The birds read them
Before they settle in for the night
They make songs of them,
Practicing quite hard
Until they are ready to sing them.

I strung words among the branches
And watched the birds weave them
Into words only they and I understand.
Sweet-smelling, harbinger words.

As the morning light bends
The birds try out my poems
Sifting through them until they find one,
Just one,
That says what they want to say.

With morning light
The words of the birdsong,
Written on the wind in tree sap,
Make poetry for all time.

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  • Johanan Rakkav on Dec 31, 2008

    Hmm…I tend to think of birds and such leaving poems in my tree (or whatever) for *me* to read. :)

  • CE Lewallen on Dec 31, 2008

    Very cute! You have a beautiful world that you live in, and as a writer, I like to think I have a similar world all my own.

  • The Wacky Wordsmith on Dec 31, 2008

    This is very nice imagery.

    The concept of birds searching for, and ultimately weaving, the “right” poem, specifically using words from a poem written by you, is quite a novel approach and I enjoyed it.

    Thanks for sharing your work.

  • QuinMonty86 on Dec 31, 2008

    I do love your poems, the way you put your words together and the pictures you paint with them. It’s a joy to read your work!!

  • AC Hamilton III on Dec 31, 2008

    I can only agree with the others; nice artistic if not verbal picture and an outstandingly unique expression, with that fantastic broadway play of singing bird’s. Great!

  • Ruby Hawk on Dec 31, 2008

    I love the poetry of the birds. I didn’t know you wrote it for them and strung it in the trees. Well, I’m so glad you do. Nothing better than birdsong. Oh,Your poem is pretty good too.

  • Ben Johnson on Jan 1, 2009

    An interesting take and one that works very well.

  • Morgana on Jan 1, 2009

    I love that you have poetry a natural occurrence and not something invented. I really enjoyed this poem.

  • Cynthia Bartlett on Jan 9, 2009

    beautiful.

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