Poem about a real place, a real tree on a real tower.

The old courthouse square was a gatherin’ place
Back in Greensburg when I was a kid.
Old men would wait there while wives went shopping
And children would do what kid’s did.

Problems were solved and religions were pondered
While farm chores were waiting back home.
The economy’s bad–I bet they could fix it
If they worked ‘neath the Capitol dome.

Now they’re getting antsy–it sure looks like rain.
Why do women take so long to shop?
One guy moves over just a bit on his bench;
City pigeons don’t care where they drop.

image via wikipedia
At last time has come to get back to the farm
As they curse the latenss of the hour.
They glance up at the clock and pay one last respect
To the old tree on the courthouse tower.

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  • Darla Cooke on Jul 25, 2009

    Very nice poem!

  • Sky Lumina on Jul 25, 2009

    good to see u’re back! im used to my daily poem feed by now^^

  • DA Cournean on Jul 25, 2009

    Very nice poem Ken!

  • Lostash on Jul 25, 2009

    Ken, you are a true word-smith! You can paint a picture in just a few lines!

  • Tanya Wallace on Jul 25, 2009

    A wonderfully described poem Ken,as always I love the added humour.Excellent work,thanks for the smile.Tanya

  • Ruby Hawk on Jul 25, 2009

    Ken, I loved that one.It reminds me of my home town where the old guys used to sit on the steps of the court house and swap tales, knives and generally have a good talk fest on Saturdays when they all came to town. brings back old memories for sure.

  • Brenda Nelson on Jul 25, 2009

    Good tree, glad you added the picture or the last line wouldnt have made sense, how cool to have the tree there.

  • sandie on Jul 25, 2009

    another good poem from our ken.

  • Mark Gordon Brown on Jul 25, 2009

    I would make a more intelligent comment but its 34 +degrees C here and my brain isnt working too good for now.

  • PR Mace on Jul 25, 2009

    Nice work. I enjoyed it.

  • chitragopi on Jul 25, 2009

    A beautiful one on ur canvas.

  • Sheila M on Jul 26, 2009

    Things were just a lot simpler back then. Wives taking too long shopping was the worst of their concerns. Great poem.

  • goodselfme on Aug 2, 2009

    Good old fashioned poem. I like the idea of a tree on a building.

  • AngelaDavid on Aug 23, 2009

    I so love this! Women and birds can’t help it though! LOL

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