About the voice of reason being challenged by the fierce flames of Hades.

I often wonder what time the icy rain
Will trickle down on my charred mind.
Whistle blows and I am succumbed with fever
From your moist soul that bleeds through the mesh.
Welcome to my hide out.
I hope you will enjoy your stay here in the Imperial Palace.
Fish are jumping inside my pools of consciousness.
Are you a relic of the ancient?
Cinder is my clothing,
And the sparrow, my voice.
Down I go, crashing into your roadblock.
Mystic flutes drench my voice in fire
That builds inside this frothy nest.
I believe in the power of heavenly bliss,
And I drink to my soft silhouette
That clings to my rigged spirit.
You pound me into walls
With your fist that is a hammer.
My soul is a drum that beats rapidly
With every gaze you throw my way.
Run swiftly across icy fields to devour bassoon lungs,
And remise your song that is the golden falcon.

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  • goodselfme on Oct 23, 2008

    What a very interesting write from start to finish. I am always thrilled with what you discover to pen.

  • Nathette on Oct 24, 2008

    what a deep poem, very nice writing

  • Jenna Kittihawk on Oct 25, 2008

    “Down I go, crashing into your roadblock.”
    Wow

  • Allison Jae on Oct 26, 2008

    Nice poem, especially the last line. Just when I think I have your style figured out you surprise me. It was a good surprise. You keep your writing fresh. That’s the thing that makes it stand out. Keep that up.

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