The Great Blue Sky

SaranaraLee on Nov 6, 2009

Tags: clouds, grass, sky, sun

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What is the sky like? To me, it’s like a something to look up to. (haha)

I lie on the blanket of green

Its course fur pokes me

Fluffy puffs surround me

A yellow-white ball of flare peeks through

Its heat warming me

I am staring at the great blue sky

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Comments (4)

TroostAvenue on Nov 6, 2009
Nice, complex imagery. Makes you think.
Linda Lori on Nov 7, 2009
Very nice!
Liz Sapphire on Nov 7, 2009
Wow, very nice poem! -wink- Thanks for sharing =P
Olive B. on Jun 12, 2010
Awww….tears of happiness.

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