Light hearted sonnet.

Now as a guy it takes me time to see
That other guys will often steer us wrong
But by our birth we’re doomed as we can be
A part of brotherhood urged to belong

A bunch of guys we never lose our way
Which makes it hard to steer us back on course
We do not ask directions when we stray
Why read when pictures are a better source

And dating women is our greatest show
We steer towards other guys to hear the fact
Of something that a woman wouldn’t know
Because they’re dating guys that lack the tact

But as a guy with this I now discern
That given time even a steer can learn

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Comments (5)
  • chennysan on May 3, 2011

    a little different from your usual style but nice nevertheless

  • ceegirl on May 3, 2011

    You said it all.

  • neopisiva on May 4, 2011

    Oh,I hope it’s not always like that.:)
    Good work though.:)

  • CHIPMUNK on May 4, 2011

    unique

  • Francois Hagnere on May 6, 2011

    Very well written. Thank you.

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