The Heart

MJPatrick on Nov 5, 2008

Tags: coals, flames, heart, oxygen

What the heart can do.

The heart is like
     coals,
Sometimes it burns
     red hot,
          sometimes
    cool ash-grey.
Either way,
    a wisp,
          of oxygen
                arouses
                        flames.

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Christian M Archer on Nov 5, 2008
Attractive poem, and the picture complements the literature very well!
papaleng on Nov 5, 2008
short yet cute with nice simple words to express the author’s thought. i like the picture..
Liane Schmidt on Nov 5, 2008
I really love the artistic manner in which this poem was structured – it is soft like a cloud wisp!

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.
Ruby Hawk on Nov 5, 2008
I like your picture of bleeding hearts and your sweet poem. Take care, Ruby
Unofre Pili on Nov 5, 2008
I like your style MJ. Nice one.
Melody Arcamo Lagrimas on Nov 5, 2008
Lovely!
Peter Cimino on Nov 6, 2008
Very sweet. Well done
MJPatrick on Nov 6, 2008
I am most grateful for all your comments.
Peggy Toolen on Nov 7, 2008
lovely poem to match the beauty of the photo.
Melissa Christine on Nov 7, 2008
Sophisticated and lovely. Nicely said
Tony Downing on Nov 9, 2008
Love the form and your sentiments…beautiful. ~T
gabbic1219 on Nov 9, 2008
love the pic. it is beautiful as the poem is also!
GABBI!!!
Inna Tysoe on Nov 11, 2008
Lovely poem.

Thank you,

Inna
Brian Daniel Stankich on Nov 13, 2008
Just beautiful and so accurate. I really like this!
Barneslow on Nov 17, 2008
This poem is short and effective.
MMV Abad on Nov 19, 2008
Beautiful!
Jackie Stroud Painter on Dec 6, 2008
Very cute!
Clay Hurtubise on Dec 6, 2008
Good job!
Thanks,
Clay
eddiego65 on Dec 7, 2008
I agree. Beautiful poem.
BC Doan on Dec 13, 2008
Nicely done with the photo also..
Jeoffrey Meister on Dec 14, 2008
Beautiful, MJ! You’re very talented and you have a big heart (several of them).
Bo Jack Russo on Dec 21, 2008
Great.Perfect.
Virginia Wolfe on Dec 23, 2008
i like this a lot. giving it a thumbs up on stumble!
CB Orrosco on Dec 27, 2008
You did great matching words and images on a perfect pitch! Keep on hitting the keys…
Adam Henry Sears on Dec 27, 2008
Now, that’s a free verse that crosses the boundaries into poetry! Really, really well done. Thanks for sharing.
trishia on Dec 31, 2008
Great melody in this poetry!
AC Hamilton III on Jan 3, 2009
That is awesome—totally perfect imagery in words.
Dee Gold on Feb 15, 2009
really nice and I like the picture that goes with it
Sandra A Flowers on Feb 24, 2009
a beautiful poem!!
Milton H Peebles III on May 24, 2009
very good very good! 5 StarS!

Take Care, DreamSweet and let your Heart Shine!.

milty

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