I made this awhile ago it’s about a man in prison I only decided to publish it because there is an author on this sight named Casey Kelly who published a poem entitled if these walls could talk which reminded me of this poem. (Which at the time I made it was a verse for a song I made entitled The Hearts Of Men).

I had a dream more like a vision
Of a man wasting away in prison
He has a story to tell but nobody will listen
He peeks out into the hall
Searching for anybody to talk to at all
In this story i take the roll of the wall
I take the roll of the bar’s
That separate him from the guards 
I see how his life’s been so hard
Everything he touches is scarred 
I feel the secrets he writes at night in blood
Mixed with the dirt on his finger’s looks like he’s written in mud
His Wife and Daughter are long gone
His eye’s sing a sad song
The other prisoner’s sing along
These four wall’s become his world
His sheets become his girl
I’ve been here and seen this before I watch vigilante
The all knowing wall’s forever omnicient
I’m forced to watch over him
As he’s trapped in this prison
For all of his sin’s 
This is what I see when i look into the heart’s of men

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  • California Dreamer on Jun 16, 2009

    Nicely done. It is interesting how we see a poem or article that someone else has written and it reminds us of one we had wrote long ago, or puts thoughts in our heads of a new one to write :)

  • kate smedley on Jun 16, 2009

    Thanks for sharing this, I like it a lot.

  • STEVE666 on Jun 17, 2009

    Raw and powerful verses. Really enjoyed this.

  • swatilohani on Jun 19, 2009

    great

  • oktavv on Jun 19, 2009

    nice..thanks for sharing it

  • HeyZel on Jun 20, 2009

    Very nice.

  • Mikayla on Aug 13, 2009

    Well..well..well..Simon Belmont..had no idea you were into poetry. Prison is obviously one of the most depressing situations to be in. This was a touching poem about a man’s life in the incarceration system. I liked how you moulded/entangled yourself around inanimate objects..a unique way of articulating a human experience to readers. You used good form and language..but these two lines need editing mate: ‘I’ve been here and seen this before I watch vigilante–The all knowing wall’s forever omnicient’. i.e.vigilantly and over- use of adjectives i.e all-knowing and omnicient. Otherwise..it was very good Simon.

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