The Heartthrob

rutherfranc on Jan 16, 2009

Tags: heartthrob, love, music, Poetry, sounds

We thought he has everything, but then…

The height, the charm, the looks
The gait, the swagger, the hooks
The ride, the sounds, the wheels
The smile, the wink, the shrills
The grades, the awards, the sports
The cheerers, the swooners, the cohorts
The hangers-on, the critics, the fans
The music, the poetry, the bands
All of these he’s grabbed
But amidst all of the garb
no fun being a hearthrob
for I have the one he loved

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Debra. on Jan 16, 2009
That was creative and different! Nice job!

God bless.
cardy on Jan 16, 2009
good work hear.
Morgana on Jan 16, 2009
That’s right!!! It takes more than flashy looks to get the girls. I wrote a poem about the same theme..coming soon near you. Lol
Joni Keith on Jan 16, 2009
This poem has a great flow to it. I like the subject, as well.
spiritwalker on Jan 16, 2009
love the structure alot. I tend to not be very conventional at times. I like it!!!
Chris Cariad on Jan 16, 2009
loved the originality!
sable Rose on Jan 16, 2009
As always your writing imitates true issues in life. Great writing!
diyanah91 on Jan 16, 2009
out of the ordinary
macon on Jan 17, 2009
hah! left a dent in my heart…
seashell66 on Jan 17, 2009
I was cheering for you at the end!

Great poem.
denus on Jan 18, 2009
god job once agaiN!

cheers
eddiego65 on Jan 22, 2009
Good for you! Great write.
Clay Hurtubise on Jan 22, 2009
Nice work, like the style.
Thanks,
Clay
lovelyhoney on Jan 28, 2009
ur a heart throb for me will u pl read my poetr and also see can u be a heart throb like i see
lh
Karen Gross on Feb 5, 2009
Great poem! Hope it is autobiographical. It seems right that the romantic poet should get the girl.
lovely honey on Feb 9, 2009
i wrote ”THE HEART THROB”

BUT THEY did not publish it here as it was published in yahoo and amdts are not accepted by ur triond. any how ur a lovely poet and nice making friends with you since u already have a hearth throb and ur proud of it, please read my POEM and do comment on this one

I WILL ENTICE YOU
thankx
lh
Bullwinkle Muse on Mar 17, 2009
Would she be called a “trophy wife”? nicely done
rutherfranc on Mar 17, 2009
saved her from that fate actually, BWM..
DA Cournean on Mar 17, 2009
Very nice
Tammy Wyrick on Mar 17, 2009
Very rythematic. (Is that a word?) Your are right that one on the outside seems to have it all, but not having anything inside will make you lose the girl. Inner beauty is the most flashiest of them all.
C. S. Robins on Mar 17, 2009
I had to read this poem a second time to get it; I like that. Very nice
Kimberly Moore on Mar 18, 2009
Nice Work!:) he has everything except one thing to know how to love someone..
Alina Beck on Mar 18, 2009
Great – I loved this. Simple yet profound all at once!
Denise Kawaii on Mar 22, 2009
Great poem, I like the build up to the end when we discover that something is missing from his life.

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