The Heat of Passion

diamondpoet on Dec 2, 2009

Tags: emotions, fire, heat, love making, passion

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Poem about making love.

It was at that moment.

Love seemed to soar.

Together we ignited,

the sparks of passion.

Lips Bonded closely together.

So intense was the heat.

The world could see

the molten lava……

overflow of our love.

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Comments (24)

Billyfnstacy on Dec 2, 2009
Wow, very beautiful and full of emotion.
Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Dec 2, 2009
Awe my sistah, sounds like someone is in LOVE!!!!!
drelayaraja on Dec 2, 2009
Wonderful one. Great visuals.
spiritwalker on Dec 2, 2009
somebody seems really horney
Joie Schmidt on Dec 2, 2009
I really like the way you placed the pictures between your words to further “ignite” the passionate feeling you successfully conveyed in this piece.

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.
LoveDoctor on Dec 2, 2009
Wow! Excellent and vivid imagery. nice pics too.
Eunice Tan on Dec 2, 2009
Good comparison. I feel the heat.
Linda Lori on Dec 3, 2009
Very hot!
Themax on Dec 3, 2009
Wow… that is a burning love poem dp very hot,Thanks
lonewolf13 on Dec 3, 2009
You almost make me want to “fall in love” again… but can I trust another?
lonewolf13 on Dec 3, 2009
By the way, it was a very good poem!
Mike1229 on Dec 3, 2009
Vivid
Christine Ramsay on Dec 3, 2009
Beaitifully described passion. Well done.

Christine
abhishek40914 on Dec 3, 2009
wonderful with some beautiful pics
Frances Lawrence on Dec 3, 2009
A vey good poem, beautifully written.
Snooky on Dec 3, 2009
Whew! merci, I got to go turn my ac back on.
diamondpoet on Dec 3, 2009
You all know that this is what love making is all about. lol
mkd1788 on Dec 3, 2009
nice theme u have used and along that you have beautifully presented…
Jane Jane on Dec 3, 2009
very passionate. nice piece.
giftarist on Dec 3, 2009
It’s flaming!
Darla Cooke on Dec 3, 2009
Beautiful poem!
cutedrishti8 on Dec 3, 2009
Wonderful poem with nice pics..
Lyn Z on Dec 3, 2009
That was amazing. Very poetic as they say ; > P
LovelyWolf on Dec 3, 2009
*Sigh* I wish I had someone to share that heat with… Oh well, I’ll just write, nice poem by the way…lol

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