Grab it while you can.

Come live this moment, the Here and Now
Among the vast cascade of years
Wring every drop that Fates allow
From cold jealousies and furnished fears.

Eventually you might come to see
My soul by yours beguiled
Our dance of Love would be as free
As the laughter of a playful child.

Average lovelies are forever fifteen
While true beauty grows older above
No great passion in those too green
While fine for lust, but not for Love.

Come love me, for what time may take
Before you must drift away
Of my hunger a virtue I will make
And dine upon you while I may.

Let us wrestle with the hand of Fate
And if our success is meant
Let love be something we can create
Despite others attempts to prevent.

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  • lindalulu on Nov 26, 2008

    Very nice Reilley!

  • Jasin on Nov 26, 2008

    Lovely poem.

  • Michele Cameron Drew on Nov 26, 2008

    Reilly, this is very very good and I love it except that last line. While getting the message across it just doesn’t seem to fit the flow no matter how I read it. If I may be so bold as to suggest, I would try reworking the last stanza a little bit. Aside from that it’s beautiful, very heartfelt and flows like a river. Nice work!

    -M

  • Morgana on Nov 26, 2008

    Absolutely beautiful

  • Debra. on Nov 27, 2008

    I absolutely adored it! God bless, Reilley.

  • Cynthia Bartlett on Aug 2, 2009

    WOW!

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